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high the sky up above

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critique please! ^^
im going to a con tomorrow so i wont be here until i get back XD

inspired by this
youtu.be/0cubrepM4Rk?list=PLiR…
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I love the eye-popping colours used in this artwork, it grabbed my attention while scrolling down the watch section. The use of purple in the character is excellent, however the background seems untidy. I do like the space atmosphere tho. I'm guessing that the light source comes from above which means that there should be dark areas on the scarf part under its nose. Also I would suggest putting highlight on his nose since it's huge and could reflect light back the most. The cartoonish style is spot on and moreover, the facial expression is fantastic! To improve, since this is set in space, there are going to be different light sources coming from large objects such as the sun, orange light could come from the left or right depending on where the sun is. Adding orange light to the artwork might challenge you to improve further and it brings up more creativity and impact.

Overall, it's an attractive artwork with wonderful colours, very spectacular despite some flaws on the shading and low originality.